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The Lonely Visard

Post by Izan Nagi on Sat Apr 18, 2015 8:27 pm

The Basics

Name: Izan Nagi
English Translation: its a pun on the Japanese god of gods Izanagi.
Race: Visard
Gender: male and male.
Date of Birth: January 1, 1881.
Date of Death: January 1, 1901.
Appearance Age: weirdly, even though he is 20 he is often mistaken for a teen do to having such a young appearance.
Actual Age: 114
Organization and Rank: former Gotei 13, captain, until the visard incident.
Height: about five foot and 11 inches
Weight: about 120. natural body being 90 ish and the muscle being a bit above average and making up the rest.
Hair color: His hair normally is white, however he does dye it black, though for some reason unknown to him, three stripes going around his hair are always white.
Eye color: Both eyes are, for some reason, yellow. Even he is not aware of why they are yellow as no one in his family has naturally yellow eyes. even he is not aware why as no one in his family line had natural yellow eyes.
General Appearance: He is around five foot six inches. Lets start describing his hair....the weirdest part about him. His hair is naturally white but he dyes it black, though for some reason three stripes that circle his head stay white. His eyes are even weirder, as genetics say he should not have them, most of his family being red or purple eyes but not one yellow eye in the entire family. His skin is actually a normal white skin, while his build is above average, just above the muscle you'd expect from a guy who works out for fun. He also has a scar on his chest from his battle with is inner hollow. His normal outfit, since he is not in the Gotei 13 anymore, consists of a red undershirt with three buttons on the top. Over this he wears a black button up short sleeves shirt, which he never buttons and wears as an over shirt. For his lower half he wears blue jeans that always look brand new, and black sneakers which seem to always be as fresh as ever.

The Psyche

Redeeming Qualities:

Somewhat of an optimist, Izan tries to look at the brighter side of things. For example, when he found out just how good of a murder his zanpakuto spirit was in life, he said he was glad that he was sealed int he zanpakuto, because he would have made a dangerous hollow. This can attract people who like that kind of somewhat innocence but some people get annoyed by optimists so that may drive them away.

Goody-frigging to shoes: Yep, he is one of those annoying guys. He fights for what he sees as good, no exceptions. If he thinks someone does deserve to die, he'll fight for them. He also cause of this has different views than the rest of the Gotei 13. He doesn't see hollows as monster, but more damaged souls who need some help with a sword to mask. As such he doesn't believe people should be killed just because they are Visard, if anything they are the next evolution of Shinigami, those who can use both negative and positive Reshi.

Strong Will: If he is fighting for what he believes in his will is what keeps him going above all else, he is willing to break through any obstacle, get past anything if it applies to what he thinks is right.

Combat persona: in combat, even while mid fight, Izan will try to reason with the other person, especially if they are powerful as to avoid casualties. If they refuse he will have one of two combat persona's active: Quiet calculated Shinigami, or something along what you would expect from the eleventh squad. His fist one is calculative, his mind thinking in a fast pace while still focusing on the battle, acting accordingly. His other one is basically a berserk-er, hit hard, hit fast, and dominate the opponent. This part focuses more on instinct than anything else. Both parts can be seen as good or bad depending on what your perspective is.

Curious: Yet again, another trait that works both ways. He is curious, very very curious. When observing he will follow you around to gather data, whether you like it or not O~O, and will possibly barrage you with questions. Some find this cute, while some find it annoying.

Negative Qualities:

Somewhat of an optimist, Izan tries to look at the brighter side of things. For example, when he found out just how good of a murder his zanpakuto spirit was in life, he said he was glad that he was sealed int he zanpakuto, because he would have made a dangerous hollow. This can attract people who like that kind of somewhat innocence but some people get annoyed by optimists so that may drive them away.

Goody-frigging to shoes: Yep he is one of those annoying guys. He fights for what he sees as good, no exceptions. If he thinks someone does deserve to die, he'll fight for them. He also cause of this has different views than the rest of the Gotei 13. He doesn't see hollows as monster, but more damaged souls who need some help with a sword to mask. As such he doesn't believe people should be killed just because they are Visard, if anything they are the next evolution of Shinigami, those who can use both negative and positive Reshi.

Strong Will: If he is fighting for what he believes in his will is what keeps him going above all else, he is willing to break through any obstacle, get past anything if it applies to what he thinks is right.

Combat persona: In combat, even while mid fight, Izan will try to reason with the other person, especially if they are powerful as to avoid casualties. If they refuse he will have one of two combat persona's active: Quiet calculated Shinigami, or something along what you would expect from the eleventh squad. His fist one is calculative, his mind thinking in a fast pace while still focusing on the battle, acting accordingly. His other one is basically a berserk-er, hit hard, hit fast, and dominate the opponent. This part focuses more on instinct than anything else. Both parts can be seen as good or bad depending on what your perspective is.

Curious: Yet again, another trait that works both ways. He is curious, very very curious. When observing he will follow you around to gather data, whether you like it or not O~O, and will possibly barrage you with questions. Some find this cute, while some find it annoying.

Impatient: He has short patience, especially with his curious nature. He doesn't like to wait too long, and most likely while he is waiting is using something to occupy his brain. Though he may be patient if its research of something sciencey that sorta requires patience. Impatient people annoy most other people, though other impatient people may prefer to be with other ones.
Likes: sweets, manga, star-wars, knowing more about other races, and seeing friends happy.
Dislikes: anything that is spicy or seafood, waiting, his zanpakuto spirit, especially now.
Personal Habits: Observing a lot Pretty much what I have stated before.
Eating sweets he likes sweets and thus eats them a lot he prefers them frozen, especially chocolate. Weirdly doesn't gain fat despite how much sugar food he has.
He used to make random inventions for fun, such as a bomb that turned the area into a place that looks like a rave is going on, or gumballs that can taste like anything.
Goals:
His is to two simple goals.
Find out more, FOR SCIENCE!...with humanity.
Defend those he cares for.
Short-term Goals: N/a
Long-term Goals: the two above. I'd expand more on them but I'd basically be repeating the same with different words.
General Personality:
This will vary from whether you know the Captain of the 12th squad who "died years ago" (see history) or if you know the random kid who doesn't do much. Before he was a Visard, he was cool, caring, calculative, and a much nicer captain that Mayuri. (not as bad ass and awesome mind you but still) He is caring, rarely turning his back on those he cares, and most of the time they turned their backs too. He would stand up for what he believes in when against all odds. He wasn't very secretive unless ordered to be or it would hurt a person he is fighting for.

He is gentle and sympathetic, feeling pain even as he vanquishes a hollow, though he does try to rationalize it as guiding the soul to where it belongs and healing the whole that broke its heart. Though his is sweet, he will hold a grudge if you piss him off enough. Despite his skill in fighting he will never brutally harm a person unnecessarily, although he understands that sometimes he must do so. He also possesses great strength, will, and drive, able to face and overcome conflict. He accepts many people of almost any point, unless you are a very, very bad person. But this goody two shoes is somewhat gone. Now that he is a Visard, he remains hidden, even going to the point of dying his hair to avoid detection.

He hides from others and refuses to talk with any undead. He dies his hair and wears normal people clothing, and lowers his spiritual powers to avoid detection. He does this as, with all normal people, he doesn't want to die. He even refuses to get any of his past inventions or remake them, the only thing he keeps is his zanpakuto, that's it. While cutting himself off from almost everything in his former life, he is willing to communicate with pretty much anyone who can see him ex: anything not hollow.  Full Bringers are not included in the category. He is now more curious than ever, now that he is able to observe Quincy, Super Humans, and Fullbringers up close. He will most likely watch you and jot down notes and if you talk to him, ask a lot of questions. He will not leave your side if you make him curious enough, but hes not gonna do anything bad to ya. He is very much so excited to find more about these above average humans, though he seems to be rather bland about it, trying not to stand out, underneath bubbling with so much excitement he could EXPLODE!
Something Special: His mind is like a motor, with occasionally ADHD...not really just his brain jumps alot.
The Power
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Vaizard
zanpakuto Name:
Satsujin
Zanpakutō Name English Translation: Murder, she says that is her name since she cannot remember her old one.

Sealed Zanpakutō Appearance: Its a serrated Kattana. Though of average size, its out line of it is serrated, in fact it seems to have chains around it like a chainsaw. It has switch under the hilt there is a switch, which when pressed makes the chains move like a chainsaw. The hilt is covered in a think metal the same as the zanpakuto that has no opening. It it is designed to, when he touches it, make an opening for his hand to get in, then form around his wrist, making the perfect hand guard. Before he became 10th seat it was merely a regular kattana, all of these are modifications he made to the zanpakuto it's self.
Release Phrase:
"Fire at will."

Shikai Appearance: Pretty much the sealed form, but shinier... no seriously. The blade is all around shinier, so much that is glows. The tip its self (where Kido "bullets" are fired from) glows the brightest. Now including modifications made by the Izan Nagi: that guard earlier goes all the way up his arm, making some what of a gauntlet, elbow pad, the armor around the fore arm and lower arm, and a big shoulder pad. The chains also make sparks in this form.
Shikai Ability:
He can shoot kido in bullet form. The effect, even size in case of AOE, and end result are the same, but it is the size and speed of the shot is like a bullet. It can apply the element of a kido to the blade its self. The chains around it can also disappear and appear according to the user's will.

Bankai Name:
Satsujin Shi (Murder Dead)
Bankai Appearance: the weapon becomes a GIANT guillotine blade which is very light despite its appearance, his ex girl friend described it as holding a dagger. It has a chain attached to his arm, which is 1. unbreakable, and can grow up to 80 feet. the chains and every mod he made to the sword disappear. He gets put in a black heads man cloak.
Bankai Ability:
the cloak fends off kido/ not physical attacks of Lieutenant level or lower and melee attacks of fourth seat and lower, though it cannot fend of negative reshie....also it looks cool. It also doubles the size of spells, especially explosions, and also triples their strength, however they must be used as the "Kido bullets” are used. This effect can also be used on all versions Cero and Bala.
Spoiler:
Spirit Appearance:
His zanpakuto looked pretty much the same both before and after hollowfication, though when the hollow fused with the spirit, it turned black and white. She looks to be somewhere in her early to mid-teens. She is typically seen wearing dresses in a punk-Gothic Lolita style. She has purple-blue hair (now black) spiked up in a punk style and and her eyes are amber ish. Her skin is of course now white, and she is kinda like Hollow Zangetsu, a human that has the color scheme of a hollow.
Spirit Personality:
She has a colorful personality, ranging from playful and sweet to sadistic and secretive. She does, however, always behave in a mock-childish manner. She has a childlike need to be entertained at all times, normally yanking Izan into her world. She has also shown signs of sadism and seems to enjoy the suffering of others. She has tortured multiple people, and killed many in her past.
Inner World:
the inner world is a very child like world, full of bunnies, and rabbits, and everything is stuffed animal But everything has been murdered! Yep, if it was "alive", it is dead in this world, nothing but corpses. The actual terrain is a rocky terrain, , but most of the view of the world is block off by piles of "dead" stuffed animals around it. The only "alive" things there are Satsujin and whoever she drags in/ Izan.

The Demon

Inner Hollow Name: Satsujin.
Inner Hollow Appearance: it was described about.
Mask Appearance:
Its a skull, like the one from Old Death, being skull like and evil looking, when this is on Izan's eyes turn purple.
Hollow Form Appearance: ...not..sure how to describe this.... its the 1st one.
Spoiler:
The Past
History:

Life

Izan was born in the Kanto Region of Japan. It was a huge city, millions of houses, cooperation towers, busy streets, and those who visited called it a "mini Tokyo." The city was normal accept for one thing: millions of disappearances. For some reason people would disappear, no bodies, no nothing. Little did they know that their city was a huge bundle of spiritual pressure, and thus many a hollow came to this area for food. Izan, somehow, managed to avoid being eaten for most of his young life. He went to school, like a normal kid. Got out of high school, like a normal kid. Was horrified for his life cause of all the disappearances, like a normal person, and went to be 14. By then he was considered a fourteen year old genius. He was walking home with his girlfriend, alone, when suddenly, it was black. The next time he woke up, he was in in the middle of some street, no idea what happened, no idea where he even was.

Soul Society and Training.

Waking up in some unknown area, confused on what happened. Confused he looked around trying to find out where he was. After hundreds of people just down right ignoring him like he was just someone who wanted attention, an old man explained he was in the soul society, where souls of the good went to live. After hearing his stomach growl, he asked the man if he knew where he could get some food, prompting a laugh from him till the man realized he was serious. The man said he should look for some men in a black robe with kattana. A week would pass till he found one, and until then he would have dreams of some voice calling to him and teasing him, though few words got through. He always saw some cute girl, who seemed to always be smirking and have some sweet in her mouth. He didn't know why but part of him wanted to find her, and part of him wants her to go away.

He eventually found a man in the black robe, with the Japanese sword. When asking for food, the man asked him a lot of questions, little did he know it was him seeing if he showed times of being a Shinigami. When the man thought he showed the signs he took him to the barracks, feeding him, getting him back to top condition, and then asking him to enroll in the academy. A day later, seeing as he had nothing else to do, he joined the academy.

Here he was enrolled, and trained. He was all around decent in most assets, but excelled in Kido, especially Hado, knowing Shot-of-Red-Fire when most people knew only push, bound lightning and shot of white lightning. He passed, and was given a short test to decide what squad he was gonna join, and resulted in him being an unseated 12th squad member, AKA the go-for.

Gaining rank in the 12th squad

As stated before, being an unseated member of the 12th squad, he was the go-for. Izan fetch this, Izan fetch that, Izan drink this and tell me how many organs you throw up. He was occasionally sent to kill a hollow but mostly he was the go fetch this guy. As usual in the soul society, people died, ranks opened up, but it would take two years for him to be put in a seat. This was because he was sent on a mission with a low seated member to take out a few hollows, all supposedly base hollows. This seated member happened to be his girlfriend, and the two, over the years, had re kindled their relationship. Taking down the three normal was easy, until they found out one of them was a Gillian, nearly killing his girlfriend. This through Izan into a rage, so much that he almost didn't care what happened to the Gillian. Sadly, he was unable to land a hit ignoring a few burns form the edges of Shot-of-Red-Fire. Suddenly he found himself hearing that girl's voice again. She told him she would give him her power, seeming to like his lack of remorse at the moment. When learning her name, he yelled it, and his zanpakuto gained a stronger form, though he could tell he was stronger, he didn't notice much of a difference. He heard her again and got a vague idea of her power, and instantly began barraging the Gillian with kido bullets, destroying pieces of its body. As he began to loose energy, his rage subsided, and he looked at the hollow, its arms gone and one leg limp do to lightning shots at certain tendons. He raised his sword and slashed at its mask, the spirits it had eaten sent to where they belong and the spirit its self soon to head to the soul society. After this he gained the rank of 12th seat.

Becoming a Visard

Ten years later, do to his experience with Shikai, he mastered his Shikai, thus allowing him to meet the requirements for Lieutenant. He was given the rank immediately, as the current Lieutenant was merely a filler till someone actually met the requirements, do to the last one having been killed. Twenty years after that, he managed to manifest Satsujin, who then proceeded to attack him in a berserk-er manner, holding the Bankai in her hand, caring little for anything but killing him. When doing this he was unable to use Shikai against her since it was her release and she knew how it worked easily. Thus he had to fight her on her level, brute force and blade to blade combat, barely winning. When he won she smirked and laughed, stated that that was just how her Bankai should be used, since she hated its ability, and granted him the ability to use it, as well as the release phrase. He did not reveal he knew it until years later the day of his captain's death. Seventy-Eight years later, he and his captain where sent on a mission to take out a powerful hollow. Unfortunately, on this mission the captain was killed, and the hollow had made a major blow to him, Hollow Reiryoku seeping into his damaged Soul Sleep. Again in the midst of combat, Satsujin goaded him for being weak and useless. Though he was still a bit away from mastering Bankai, Satsujin pointed out that if he didn't use it, they would surely die. While only able to have it active for a short time, he managed to destroy the hollow with it, sending the soul to where it belonged, and barely managing to come out alive. While stumbling his way back to the medical corps, he could hear something, something that sounded like a light whisper, but what he did not know. Long story short, he made it to the 4th squad barracks, got healed, was made captain, and kept that position for about two weeks.

Two weeks later he was walking with his girlfriend, on a mini date since neither of them had anything to do at the moment. Suddenly, the process started, and Izan fell to his knees in shock, his girlfriend rushing off to get help. But, do to taking too long, by the time she got back, he was gone. He had barely defeated the new Satsujin, who had explained what happened to her in the last minutes of defeat. Fearing being killed for what he had become he fled, and there was no trace. The Soul Society, after finding no leads, presumed he had died as a soul reaper falsely took the credit for killing him during the hollowfication process even though he was never there,. He fled to the human world, staying where he was, laying low not wanting to die. And thus we have the now, Izan Nagi, Visard in hiding, getting used to the new world.

Role playing Sample:

It was Night time in the Soul Society, outside the barracks, in the place where the regular spirits lived, two figures walking together holding hands lovingly. One was a male of average height, a medium build and white haired, in the normal robe of a Shinigami, while the other was a girl, similar outfit, but she was short, blue haired, and had a slim body. They each had a smile showing they were happy to be in each others company. If there had been anyone near by, it would have been obvious to them they were lovers. As they walked, they looked at the stars, enjoying their beauty.

The pink haired girl opened her mouth to speak, a smile still on her lips. "Its beautiful isn't it?" she asked. "I never got to see it like this with all those street lamps." she added.

The man smiled a bit and looked at her. "Yes you did." She looked back, perplexed by what he just said. The man laughed, and went to explain. "Remember that date we went on, the one on the cruise?"

The girl gained a look showing her mind putting it back together. "Yeah, you snuck up with me on the sky deck after curfew, and we both watched those stars in wonder until the security caught us." She said as they both laughed at the memory. "I had never seen you run so fast before."

The man laughed again, and went to make a comment, but suddenly froze in place. Something felt strange, then he keeled over, feeling some dark evil presence inside him. He heard a sinister chuckle, sounding like his zanpakuto, but different...almost hollow like. He was unable to hear his girlfriend ask what was wrong, nor that she left to get help. He suddenly found himself blacking out, and now in the world of his zanpakuto, but something was wrong. His zanpakuto was not only now a color pallet of black and white, but everything about her screamed hollow. She still kept her child like and humane appearance, even her outfit was unchanged. Just the color scheme was changed, yet everything still seemed to yell Hollow. Without warning she activated Bankai and charged him, causing both to activate it and begin a battle unlike anything he had ever faced before. Both wielded a giant guillotine blade, the man's being black mostly, with the bottom white and glowing, as a black chain attached it to his arm. Hers was the same, only everything black was white and vice verse.

The zanpakuto attacked like a berserk-er, forcing the man on the defensive. After minutes of just swinging she jumped back, and charged a cero in front of the blade, then firing it. The man used Shunpo to dodge it, but barely, the explosion being at least twice of what he had seen before. The area at which it had it was nothing but  a crater, the man staring in horror, awe, and surprise. Taking the opportunity, the zanpakuto spirit flung her blade at him,  the chain extending, getting longer than it was earlier, the man barely managing to avoid being killed, gaining a huge gash on his chest. During this time, the spirit started monologuing on how weak and pathetic he had always been, and that she deserved this body, not him. During this rant, the man grabbed the blade, as it turned back into his, the scheme looked like his, and it merely disappeared as the spirit's left over chain began to disintegrate. He looked at her, as she detached the chain from her arm, and use Shunpo again, using the blade to cleave her in half.

She smirked, and looked at him. "Seems I don't deserve this body after all." She said, seeming a bit sad but over joyed about something else. "But today is your unlucky they. The reason all of this is happening is because of the day your captain died. The hollow his your Soul Sleep, and now you've hollowfied, though you have managed to win. You are a Visard now Izan!" She screamed at him as a look of horror appeared on the man's face. "That's right, you a Visard, your supposed next step in evolution, but to everyone else a monster that shouldn't exist! You'll be hunted down and murdered! Your own girl friend will be forced to hunt you down and end you!" She screamed enjoying his shock and horror. "Hope you enjoy this body, cause you won't have it for long!" She said before dissipating. He awoke in the real world, damage done all around him, houses wrecked and his own body having that giant gash from the guillotine blade strike. He opened a portal to the human world and fled, running until he found a place to rest. He took out a few pills, which he always kept on hand in case of emergencies. These pills were the equivalency of healing Kido, though to to the level he had to eat them all just to stop bleeding, the scab from the cut becoming a some what deep scar on his chest later on. Now, he had no choice but to hide in the human world till the day he died.


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Re: The Lonely Visard

Post by Osamu Shimazu on Thu Apr 23, 2015 11:51 pm

Okay, before we begin officially, let me make mention of something in specific: Bleach Damnation, in my eyes, was made to cater to any kind of RolePlayer (Forum, ChatBox etc., etc.) as well as any experience level (beginner, intermediate, advanced etc., etc.). That being said, what you have here is largely acceptable, however it isn't without some noteworthy flaws.

That being said, I'm prepared to approve this application for Officer Bracket with 75 Stat Points and 6 Perk Points with the stipulation that your Bankai is locked and removed until you earn it in-character.

If you want a higher grade and want constructive criticism, please let me know and we'll continue from there. We'll work on getting you at least Lieutenant Bracket, if not higher. But, if you don't want to hear the constructive criticism (which I won't think any differently of you for it, nor will you be looked down on for denying it), then that is absolutely fine!

Just get back with me and let me know :)
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Re: The Lonely Visard

Post by Izan Nagi on Fri Apr 24, 2015 12:10 am

I would love some, making my characters better is always ... well better XD.

Plus since I am aiming for Captain any form of constructive criticism is worth its weight in gold ... if words had weight. TY

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Post by Osamu Shimazu on Fri Apr 24, 2015 2:18 am

Okay, the biggest thing currently going against you on this application is your grammar. There's a lot of misspelled words, sentences that don't begin with a capital letter and misplaced punctuation. And unfortunately, I mean a lot.

Oftentimes in this application when you want to emphasize something, you put an entire word in capital letters, which is sort of sloppy. You also use homonyms in place of other words, e.g. "His hair is NATURALLY white but he dies it black," "dies," should be, "dyes." Some other grammatical mistakes include, "noone," instead of, "no one."

The mistakes that bring this application down are incredibly trivial. While easy to fix, they're also very, very numerous.

Additionally, to aim for Lieutenant Bracket or higher, a RolePlay sample is required.

So, what I would recommend: review your own application where punctuation and word choice is concerned; run it through a spell checker and fix any spelling errors present. Make sure each new sentence begins with a capital letter and add a RolePlay Sample.

We'll go from there.
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Post by Izan Nagi on Sun Apr 26, 2015 3:29 am

ran it through a word thingy. did some manual changes, and finished editing as far as I can tell. Also the roleplay sample is already there.
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Post by Osamu Shimazu on Sun Apr 26, 2015 3:39 am

All seems in order. Welcome to the Lieutenant Bracket!
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Post by Izan Nagi on Mon Mar 21, 2016 12:05 pm

Spiritual Combat: Expert
Armed Combat: Beginner
Cero: Advanced
Hado: Intermediate
Bakudo: Beginner
Reiatsu Perception: Intermediate


Cero (beam version): pretty basic, shot from his middle and index fingers (or tip of the blade when he is using Shikai/middle of the bladed side for Bankai), the cero is charged (unless in shikai or bankai)  for two seconds (not enough time to dodge but certainly enough time put up a mask or defensive technique) and then fired at the opponent in the form of a beam, slicing through enemies. Indigo colored.

Doom Blast (Boomy version): the same as Cero, accept rather than slicing, it can be fired for three seconds as a constant beam, after it disappears, the areas where the beam touched explode, about the size of a large sized building. Inidgo colored.

Cero Córnea: allows him to shoot Doom Blast or Cero from his eyes. Should there be blood on or near his eyes, he can also use Grey Ren Cero from them too.

Grey Ren Cero: Cutting himself and mixing his blood with a normal Cero, Izan created Grey Ren Cero. It is many times more powerful than a normal Cero, disturbing the fabric of space as it travels. Upon release, it spins like a razor as it compresses and decompresses due to the sheer speed and raw power. The explosion is the size of a skyscraper. The color is now black.

Hado #1 Push: Pointing a finger (unless shikai or bankai is in use) at an opponent, a small amount energy is dispelled from the tip. In Izan's case, the force is strong enough to send an opponent flying back yards.

Hado #4 Shot of White Lightning: Using his finger (unless shikai/bankai is in use) to shoot concentrated bolt of lighting through his opponent. While normally this would be the length of ones fingers, but do to his spiritual power, it is twice the size of fullgrown men and as long as trains.

Hado #11 Bound Lightning: what ever the use is touching is bound with the lightning element, damaging anything that object touches.

Hado #31 Shot of Red Fire: gathering flames in his hand (unless shikai/bankai is in use), Izan fires a beam of heated energy, with one purpose: vaporizing what ever is in the cylinder that forms. The cylinder is about the size of a full grown man, and as long as three train carts. This cannot items used for any releases.

Hado #32 Yellow Fire Flash: a yellow ball of energy forms over Izan's Zanpakuto fires a wide, horizontal arc of yellow energy at the target, the size of the zanpakuto. (double size in bankai.)

Hado #33 Blue Fire Crash Down: Blue flames discharge from the palm. Izan aims the palm of his hand (unless shikai/bankai is in use) at their target and generates a torrent of blue energy before firing it at their target. The energy moves like a direct blast easily the size of a two trains. He can even harm people in Second Release with this. (ex: harming their bankai or their resurrection)

Hado #54 Abolishing Flame: Izan fires an oblong blast of purple energy from their hand which completely incinerates a target upon contact.

Hado #57 Ground Swell Dance: Izan places out his hand, and uses any objects around them as weapons, telepathically. (Izan jokingly calls this Force Throw)

Hado #63 Fiery Lightning Howl: Izan charges lightning into his hand  (unless shikai/bankai is in use), and then fires out a lightning bolt, with devastatingly destructive results.

Hado #73 Twin Lotus Blue Fire, Crash Down: Izan charges two Hado #33s in his hands (unless shikai/bankai is in use), and combines them, along with a pushing motion, creating a much powerful spell, even more powerful than using the original twice, and twice as big and long.

Hado #78 Cutting Flower Ring: Izan charges a large amount of energy from his Zanpakutō before blasting it outward with enough power to level a building.

Bakudo #1 Restraint: Izan points his index and middle fingers at the intended target(s), causing the target's arms to lock behind their back. He can use this on one or many targets. One's strength (spiritual or physical) must equal his spiritual strength.

Bakudo #3 Crawling Rope: Izan binds enemies with a Reishi rope to stop their movement. Generating a crackling yellow energy rope within his/her hand(s), the practitioner throws it toward the opponent. The energy winds around the opponent's arms and body, immobilizing them. One's strength (spiritual or physical) must equal his spiritual strength.

Bakudo #8 Repulse: Izan generates an orb of light blue energy which repels whatever strikes it. Those hit by it are sent flying yards away.


Bakudo #9 Strike: Izan draws the symbols of the spell in the air, his/her entire body permeates a red energy, which engulfs the body of the target, causing complete paralysis. One's strength (spiritual or physical) must equal his spiritual strength.
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